Lawn Art Assignment Critique

OK my three to critique are Melissa Sybert, Mary Travis, and Andy Brown

Melissa Sybert

Your page came out very nice. Its very esy to navigate through and the pictures are nice to look at. Sometimes i think its almost too dark like you could have used brighter colors in some places to even out the tone. I was hoping you would have used the rollover feature for you links to your other pages rather then just keeping them the same. i think it wouldve added a little more to the page other than that the page looks very professional. so far ur the only person i have to critique so yea.

Mary Travis

Page still not up or i cant seem to find a link on twitter or blogger

Andy Brown

Page still not up..

This is my opinion on the world...

OK so this is going to me my critique post for the 3 web sites

rmilligan.willyworld.org

i really like the way the page feels.  The angle the corn is 

at is nice and gets the point across but isn't too out there 

in ur face. The information is easily read at the bottom 

and the little figure in the bottom  presenting the items 

in a nice touch.  the only thing i would have changed 

was made the picture in the top look like its behind 

the corn rather then in front.

kleisman.willyworld.org
Ok in this one i like a lot the grunge feel is very 
obvious.  I like the abstract look of everything in 
the background.  I got to see this site from the 
beginning so i know the troubles involved with 
everything.  The only thing if possible id change 
would be the text in the boxes, id change them to 
a more appropriate font that gives the same feel as 
the rest of the page, but like i said i know the 
suffering that went into getting it to even look right 
so yea. 

mfoster.willyworld.org
This one when i opened it up was a lot different 
then the other 2 i looked at.  Mainly because it was really 
bright compared to the others, but no one said that was 
wrong.  I really enjoy the way the pictures are placed in 
with the effects around the edges, then it looks like all the 
pictures have a pit of a gradient over them and it matches
the look very well its a cool use of gradients.  Then the 
way art club has the drop shadow really adds to the looks 
and help bring it out more.  I dont really see anything to 
change about it.  If anything maybe the main text font.. it 
could be somewhat hard to read.

Hope what i said helps someone if not. well then whatever see if i care. 

Assignment 1 Site

www.epayne.willyworld.org check it out!

Art Club Page Defense Post

Ok my inspiration came from, of course when seen, graffiti. I find graffiti to be a great way for someone to get how they feel on a subject out. Most is very improvised and alot of work. Also i find it to be a more modern look. Using an actual image of the corn booth was to show that the booth was in front of the wall like on the street. Eventually images will be but on the wall in the form of a montage to show the fun of art club. Hope it comes out the way i want it to.

First Post

First real post just doing it cuz i guess i should