OK so this is going to me my critique post for the 3 web sites
rmilligan.willyworld.org
i really like the way the page feels. The angle the corn is
at is nice and gets the point across but isn't too out there
in ur face. The information is easily read at the bottom
and the little figure in the bottom presenting the items
in a nice touch. the only thing i would have changed
was made the picture in the top look like its behind
the corn rather then in front.
kleisman.willyworld.org
Ok in this one i like a lot the grunge feel is very
obvious. I like the abstract look of everything in
the background. I got to see this site from the
beginning so i know the troubles involved with
everything. The only thing if possible id change
would be the text in the boxes, id change them to
a more appropriate font that gives the same feel as
the rest of the page, but like i said i know the
suffering that went into getting it to even look right
so yea.
mfoster.willyworld.org
This one when i opened it up was a lot different
then the other 2 i looked at. Mainly because it was really
bright compared to the others, but no one said that was
wrong. I really enjoy the way the pictures are placed in
with the effects around the edges, then it looks like all the
pictures have a pit of a gradient over them and it matches
the look very well its a cool use of gradients. Then the
way art club has the drop shadow really adds to the looks
and help bring it out more. I dont really see anything to
change about it. If anything maybe the main text font.. it
could be somewhat hard to read.
Hope what i said helps someone if not. well then whatever see if i care.
